Rachel is a blogger that wants to deliver a message about
niceness and goodness and talks mainly about social justice, where these “two
words” had led, in our society to many problems and oppressions. Well,
nowadays, many people are taking this “opportunity” to take advantage of being
nice with the oppressed whose privileges and rights are taken and therefore it has
also created problems essentially in the idea of marginalization; and that is
thanks to the “manners” and “tones” as the author mentioned and many other wise
ways… Ultimately, the author wants to alert the society, through social media
about this ‘’weapon’’, to be able to live a life where the society will be
built on the principles of privileges, equality and respect.
Check moodle for your grade. The wording of the main idea is vague and confusing. Don't quote in summary. The body of the summary is grammatically incorrect and vague. Plus I'm not sure you follow the order of the text, though at the end you get the main purpose of the essay.
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