Wajiha El Rabaa
Ms. Dania Adra
English 203
September
26, 2015
Perspectives in Grayson’s text
The author is struck, disappointed
as she says how much human rights are misrepresented by the media and the
politicians… She was struck by the “stage management behind the scenes”
(Grayson, 4) around Malala and even seemed angry when listing “Malala the book,
Malala the film, Malala the award nominee, Malala the portrait” (Grayson, 4)
before wondering “how many people can name the other girls injured when Malala
was shot ? What quantity of care and support did they receive?”. (Grayson, 4)
She clearly is revolted by the inequality and the injustice exerted in the name
of human rights. By expressing what she personally feels through, for instance
(in the quotes above) detailed and precise enumeration and punctilious
questions, she may reach her readers’ emotions so that they at least understand
her and see the importance of the cause by seeing how much she is implicated,
at least emotionally.
Regarding its structure, this
text is argumentative and was written in impersonal mode, mainly using compare
and contrast, between Malala and the thousands other people (women, children)
who suffered at least as much as her, and still suffer. The author mentions
migrants “coming to Britain that often end up being held in detention centers
or virtually penniless in the community living on vouchers with limited access
to health care” (Grayson, 3) before pointing that “one young lady [Malala] is
flown in to the UK and provided with the best possible care […] appearing to
bypass the hurdles faced by many” (Grayson, 3). The text is written in clear
language thus allowing any reader to understand, and in a good organization of
thought : we can expect readers to follow the author’s thought and then end up
with the same conclusions as her… Also, the text describes Malala as a
commodity, yet a “very marketable western commodity” (Grayson, 1) at the
beginning of the text to talk later about her “commodification” (Grayson, 3)…
The use of this word to talk about a human aims to show the extent of
exploitation of Malala by western media and politicians…
The idea debated in the text is that
the fight for human rights, against injustice is not well lead, at least in Malala’s
case. According to the text, most of the people who are not granted their
rights are ignored, and the few that are helped, including Malala, are used to
show that media and politicians are concerned about human rights. From the
evidence given by the text, we can mention that Malala was chosen among
thousands of people harmed in Pakistan and she was helped by the western
politicians because she fitted in their objectives : she was used by the media
and them to show their concern in women’s rights and gender justice. However,
the same politicians (ex Gordon Brown) didn’t apply this gender justice in
Britain, and the migrants coming from east fleeing torture and violence were not
welcome to Britain, unlike Malala. Also, the Rigoberta Menchu case is
mentioned. She was, 20 years ago, a celebrity like Malala. She wrote a book
about the civil war in Guatemala. It was proven later that she had “repeatedly
described experiences she never had herself” (Grayson, 5). Furthermore, many
people wanting gender justice were ignored by the politicians who pretend
supporting human rights and gender justice, simply because they “don’t fit in a
popular narrative, especially if victims of the states” (Grayson, 5), and the
ones who are helped are exploited. As the author bases her conclusions on
evidence in the form of examples and real facts, she works in an inductive
logic and all the evidence given and the logic behind the writing of the text
helps the author to convince her readers.
The text defends, takes the side
of human rights against those who use them to appear good and well-meaning. In
the conclusion of the text, the author says that injustice and inequality
(regarding human rights and specially women rights) shouldn’t be hidden ; we should
not let anyone distract us from them. They must be recognized at their full and
real extent to then be fought in a just, unbiased way. Therefore, the author
wants people to see the recognition of injustice as their duty, regardless who exercises
it as long as there are victims to help. Grayson wrote “All violence must be
condemned” (2). Also people have to not be distracted by what politicians and
media show and tell them if it is not completely objective. As the author
defends human rights, her conviction appears to be political. The ethical
perspective, in this text, helps the author reach her readers’ sense of duty
and thus convince them to act, and not be distracted from human rights.
Works cited
Grayson, Carol
Anne, “”Brand Malala”: Western exploitation of a school girl”, Shifting
Narratives: A Reader for Academic Writing Sinno Z., R., Bioghlu-Karkanawi
L., Fleszar D., N. Jarkas, Moughabghab E., Nish J. M., Rantisi R., Ward A. Beirut
: (Eds.). Educart (Middle East), 2015. Print.
social: run on sentences, good conclusion
ReplyDeleteemotional: good justification, more on the analysis, run on sentences
rhetorical: this comes off social and logical, talk more about grammar and style
logical: good
ethical:good