Carla
Sunji
Ms
Dania Adra
English
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26
September 2015
“Brand
Malala” Response Prep
“Brand Malala” is a blog post written by Carol Anne
Grayson. In this text, she addresses the exploitation of Malala Yousafzai and
gender justice.
Social
To begin with, Grayson uses the social perspective to
highlight the issue of gender injustice. Grayson states “there is something of
a two tier system of care going on here and it is understandable that this will
raise questions as to how we define a “deserving” case” (Grayson 595). This
statement influences society to question why other people unfortunately do not
make a deserving case as Malala has.
Emotional
Grayson seems to be irritated by Malala’s exploitation by Edelman when
she calls it “another agenda” (Grayson 595). In addition, Grayson is disturbed
by how the BBC documentary states the location of Malala’s new school in the
UK; this illustrates that she is concerned for Malala’s safety and the
possibility of another attack. The media coverage that Malala has received
ironically disturbs Grayson despite the fact that she respects what Malala
advocates.
Rhetorical
Moreover, Grayson’s rhetorical mode is impersonal since she is writing
about the exploitation of Malala. “How many people can name the other girls
injured when Malala was shot? What quality of care and support did they
receive? Are they represented by PR companies?” (Grayson 596). Grayson utilizes
rhetorical questions to highlight Edelman’s branding of Malala and stress that
the other girls did not receive equal support. In addition, Grayson uses
parallelism to illustrate “brand Malala”: “Malala the book, Malala the film,
Malala the award nominee, Malala the portrait” (Grayson 596). Along with
parallelism, she writes long sentences that captivate the audience and
encourage readers to continue this blog.
Logical
In addition, Grayson debates
injustice of other women. She presents evidence from different sources such as
a newspaper article about a woman “thrust into the limelight, pressurized by
others” (Grayson 596). This demonstrates how the focus on one person because of
the media may lead to distorted facts and unfair opportunities such as the case
with Rigoberta Menchu.
Ethical
Finally, Grayson uses ethical reasoning to support
her arguments. “Malala has been surrounded by care offered opportunities and
her story given immense media coverage. That does not happen for most women.
Many go unheard no matter how vocal they may be or what risks they take” (Grayson
597). Grayson shows the injustice to women and the unfair opportunity Malala
received. She blames the government for the “injustice and the wrongdoing”;
this demonstrates the responsibility of man (Grayson 598).
Works Cited
Grayson,
Carol A. ““Brand Malala”: Western Exploitation of a Schoolgirl.” Shifting Narratives: A
Reader for
Academic Narratives. Sinno, Z.,
Bioghlu-Karkanawi, L., Fleszar, D., Jarkas, N.,
Moughabghab, E., Nish, J. M., Rantisi, R., Ward, A.
Beirut: Educart (Middle East), 2015. Print.
social: good, watch grammar, and dont say (Grayson 598) if the sentence includes Grayson's name.
ReplyDeleteemotional: weak, so many ideas to refer to: Tone, Diction, Language and Sarcasim
rhetorical: your quotes are fragments, no tag to start the quote. Better then emotional, but JUSTIFY!
logical: you dont get both of the points she is addressing: 1. MALALA IS EXPLOITED 2. WOMEN'S RIGHTS IN UK-Gordon Brown's reaction to both
ethical: :( too simple