Sunday, September 27, 2015
Brand Malala
Nour Kabalan
Ms. Dania Adra
English 203
27 September 2015
Response Prep, “Brand Malala”
The social perspective:
In the text posted by Carol Anne
Grayson, several social implications are evoked, as for instance gender
discrimination in the eastern as well as in the western world. As stated by
Grayson, “what press usually fail to mention however is how Britain and its
allies are failing miserably on “gender justice” back home”. (594). The right
of education for all is very important; similarly everyone should have access
to a decent medical care. “I support and respect her wish of education for all”.
(Grayson 593). Finally, the effect of Media on the society is stressed all
throughout the text.
The emotional perspective:
Anger appears in Grayson’s tone,
especially when talking about violence and terrorism. To her, “all violence
must be condemned”. (Grayson 593). She raises several questions which make her
confused especially those related to politicians’ behavior and the decision to
whom care should be given. “What makes one person more deserving than another?”.
(Grayson 595). Confusion and disappointment are reflected in her rapid shifts
in style. By describing Prime Minister Gordon Brown, “In the valley of the
blind the one eyed man is king”, (Grayson 594), her sarcasm becomes obvious.
The rhetorical perspective:
The rhetorical aspect of the text
is part of the message Grayson wants to relay. That’s why she chose an
argumentative form of writing to capture the reader’s attention. The use of
short sentences and interrogative forms is a mean to convince the reader of her
point of view. “What quality of care and support did they receive? Are they
represented by PR companies?”. (Grayson 596). On the other hand, the text
appears organized by topics and thoughts with some repetitions aiming to
clarify some issues.
The logical perspective:
The debate turns around the exploitation
of Malala’s case for personal benefits by the exploiters. Grayson’s reasoning
is based on facts like Gordon Brown’s behavior towards Malala although “he is
known as a misogynist” (Grayson 594), and refused widows rights. A series of
facts are mentioned like the relation between Brown and Malala’s father as well
as the story of Menchu to convince the reader of the logic behind her claims.
This is where the inductive logic prevails in her writing.
The ethical perspective:
Almost every paragraph in this
text carries ideas related to ethics. “It shames me to say this being British”,
affirms Grayson when commenting on the exploitation of Malala. It is unethical
to her to call people injured by Taliban “victims” and those injured by US
drones “collateral damage”. Gender discrimination is unethical, business deals
and the propaganda of specific ideas by media is also unethical. “Malala likes
popstar Justin Bieber… obligatory photo with a smiling David Beckham” (Grayson
596) is not the proper way to allow Malala into the hearts of western people.
Works Cited
Grayson, Carol A.
““Brand Malala”: Western Exploitation of a Schoolgirl.” Shifting Narratives: A Reader for Academic Narratives. Sinno, Z.,
Bioghlu-Karkanawi, L., Fleszar, D., Jarkas, N.,
Moughabghab, E., Nish, J. M., Rantisi, R., Ward, A. Beirut: Educart
(Middle East), 2015. Print.
social: justify, why is she making these points? Work cited is formatted wrong, full name of editors, add page numbers before print, in text citation: dont place period before and after citation only after,
ReplyDeleteemotional: fragment quoted wrong
rhetorical: great
logical: can say more about her complex conclusions on gender rights in UK
ethical: great