Response Prep
‘“Brand Malala”: Western Exploitation of a Schoolgirl’ by
Carol Anne Grayson
1.
The Social Perspective
Grayson criticizes the exploitation of the
victims who have gained popular notice, such as Malala. She also outlines how
many victims’ voices are unheard due to their unpopular or unfavorable stories
(597). Lastly, she criticizes the making of celebrities out of these chosen
victims and the impact it has on the victim’s society/home.
2.
The Emotional Perspective
The emotions of the text are generally anger
and disappointment, and Grayson’s informal tone supports that. She is also
sarcastic on several notes throughout the text, such as the use of quotations
on “alliance” (594) and “I wonder” (596). Grayson also uses conversational diction,
such as “then of course” (596) and inserting her voice and opinion directly,
such as “I am not even sure” (594).
3.
The Rhetorical Perspective
This text is obviously argumentative and
impersonal, since Grayson uses factual evidence and multiple voices to support
her opinions. The long sentences of the text show an element of ranting, as
well as anger. Also, she uses an exclamation mark by the end of the text, which
shows full emotion. The informal language of the text feeds into the fact that
it is a blog, and it expresses opinion evidently. Her use of questions
repetitively also shows that it is conversational, as she is speaking almost
directly to her readers in order to prove her point. There is also ambiguity
present. Grayson uses words like “mentors” (593), “alliance” and “rescuing”
(594), and “fascinating” (596), which are meant for rather negative meanings
rather than the actual positive definitions.
4.
The Logical Perspective
The issue being argued and debated is the
almost ‘hidden’ element of exploitation done by powerful figures over popular
victims. Her argument is supported by powerful sources, such as Fox News, the
painter of Malala’s portrait, and a story in the New York Times. However, there
may be a counter-opinion of Malala throughout the text because Grayson begins
with a rather condescending tone towards her, “I doubt she fully realizes” (593),
and ends with bright note “I don’t imagine Malala would want this” (598). The
evidence used is rather inductive, since Grayson draws out the conclusions from
facts and from events. The text concludes with Grayson shifting towards what
Malala would want, and what she should and should not be used for, which is
rather hasty generalization because Grayson takes an immobile stand towards the
negatives of Malala’s image, and does not really focus on the positives.
5.
The Ethical Perspective
Grayson appears to be rather subjective throughout
the text, assuming a position and remaining in it rather than speaking of the
other side of the story. However, she does explore two opinions of Malala, and
does feed into factual evidences to support her claims. In terms of morals,
Grayson argues that the support of one woman is not enough compared to the
number of victims that actually require support too. She argues that it is
unfair that Malala is only acquiring the care she needs, when many other
victims require it as well. She criticizes the responsibility of the figures in
power, such as presidents and PRs. Thus, the image of utopia is almost created,
where everyone would get the care they deserve and need.
social: very too the point
ReplyDeleteemotional: good, justify more, why does she do this!? If you dont use Grayson in the sentence then your citation should be (grayson page number).
rhetorical: good, but why?
logical: this is the weakest one, what does the text say about THE UK and WOMEN
ethical: ok